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Entreaty to the Siren by ~kodama:iconkodama:



Siren, my soulful one,
Steady your song.
Siren, my soulful one,
String me along.

Discordant the chimera that so long has chimed
In vast ports of grey where great mummers have mimed.
Here bumblers as blithely both seized the dun strings
As taut, chords of din, as untethered said wings.

Siren, my soulful one,
Steady your song.
Siren, my soulful one,
String me along.

Long angelic faces, these of anglers of souls
Have cast their dull hooks, quite indolent as drolls,
Whose lines have all lithely, enlivened with shame,
The laudable, artful lambasting of names.

Siren, my soulful one,
Steady your song.
Siren, my soulful one,
String me along.

As prophets and poets, all prune and preclude
The nimblest of notions, to shade and seclude.
Foreshadowing forests, in fermenting rhyme,
My one soulful siren, my arboreal clime.

Dawning, my hopeful one,
Soften your song.
Dawning, my dimming sun,
String me along.
©2004-2009 ~kodama
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Author's Comments

This piece is a long time in the making. I've had the basic idea for some time now, it just never became what I wanted it to be, until now. I wrote a journal entry a while back describing the general idea behind my writings lately. I deleted it, because my writing seemed to be stagnating as a result. For me, writing is a way of expressing things I never knew I felt. A conscious effort to pry these things out of my head could give me the focus I need, but this effort would preclude the spontaneous sparks of creativity that I thrive on.

Maybe you will understand without a description, because, as you might have noticed, I still haven't gotten around to an actual description. I love being cryptic :B

Enjoy.

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:iconmseagtaann:
we really do need to start a band...
:iconphoenixia:
I really love the way your writing flows. Beautiful! And I like your use of sophisticated language - so much of the poetry I see these days is freehand and simple. But that only makes your work stand out more! :D

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-Phoenixia
Rising from the Ashes
:iconborderlineoptimist:
Hoorah for cryptic writing! I enjoy when a piece has the capacity for multiple interpretations. Good rythym too. Muchos kudos.

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It's Salvation that you want.
:iconneorpgomaniak:
How did you know about Siren? XDD
Anyway great lyrics(?) but where are yours paintings? :C You are... Dobra już XD Wracaj do malowania ;)

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November 30, 2004
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